I eventually got a few feedback from my classmates and it did not turn out to be what I expected it to be. A few notable ones were "What can I really achieve from this" or "The meaning is there but it just wasn't strong enough".

The feedbacks that were given was helpful and also help me change my concept a little bit more. This really got me thinking as for now it's back to the drawing board. I'll still be looking at the same subject matter of telling a story with hands but this time probably with a different medium.